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A collection of resources for lawyers, who write. From Raymond Ward, an appellate lawyer with Adams and Reese LLP in New Orleans.
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Odds and ends
Posted on January 07, 2009Here are a few things I spotted yesterday that are worth a look: The origins of error, by John McIntyre. The errors John speaks of are ?rules? that don?t exist?things like split infinitives and ending sentences with prepositions (both okay,...
Banished words
Posted on December 31, 2008It???s that time of year again. The good folks at Lake Superior State University have just released the 2009 list of banished words. If you like to play buzz-word bingo, then peruse the list and update your game cards. (Hat...
My New Year's resolutions
Posted on December 31, 2008I???ve never made New Year???s resolutions before. Now is a good time to start, because there are some good books that I want to read???or finish reading. So for 2009, I resolve to do the following: Finish Thinking Like a...
Perspectives on legal research and writing
Posted on December 28, 2008The Fall 2008 issue of Perspectives is now available. For those who don?t already know, Perspectives is a periodical for teachers of legal research and writing, published three times a year by West. The second-best thing about Perspectives (after its...
Louisiana legal-writing seminar
Posted on December 23, 2008For those who like to plan their CLE way ahead of time: the Louisiana State Bar Association is holding a legal-writing seminar in New Orleans on March 20, 2009. The seminar will be held at the Sheraton, 500 Canal Street....
Write like a human being
Posted on December 19, 2008The January 2009 issue of the ABA Journal includes a column by Jim McElhaney on direct examination. The column includes this tidbit for legal writers:Legalese is a poisonous set of verbal habits that we unconsciously turn on or off, depending...
Write like a human being
Posted on December 19, 2008The January 2009 issue of the ABA Journal includes a column by Jim McElhaney on direct examination. The column includes this tidbit for legal writers:Legalese is a poisonous set of verbal habits that we unconsciously turn on or off, depending...
Quotation of the day
Posted on December 15, 2008?Reading maketh a full man; conference a ready man; and writing an exact man.??Francis BaconHat tip to the Free Dictionary.
Briefwriting tip of the day
Posted on December 12, 2008Today?s briefwriting tip comes from Judge Posner, via Avitia v. Metropolitan Club of Chicago, Inc., 49 F.3d 1219, 1224 (7th Cir. 1995):As a reminder to future appellants, we point out that a statement of facts which, as the Club?s does,...
Overstatement
Posted on December 11, 2008At Robust Writing, Jesse Hines has written an excellent post on Overstatements: An Enemy of Honest and Accurate Writing. I would add that overstatement is an enemy of persuasion, as it?s highly likely to set off the judge?s bullshit detector.
10 keyboard shortcuts you should know
Posted on December 09, 2008If you work with a keyboard, then you should know Dan Pinnington?s 10 skills to make your typing faster and easier. I?ve been working with computers since 1982?virtually my entire adult life?and I learned three new things by readings Dan?s...
Our Christmas newsletter
Posted on December 07, 2008I?ve uploaded our annual Christmas newsletter. If you?re interested in reading it, click here.
What not to write in an e-mail
Posted on December 05, 2008Death by Email has a top 10 list of phrases to never write in an e-mail. The author, Roger Matus, advises, ?If you find yourself typing one of these phrases, perhaps you should delete the entire email.?Hat tip to the...
An idle thought
Posted on December 03, 2008I figure there?s nothing like gross over-generalization to stir up some comment and debate. So here goes.There are two things that most litigators should know how to do: fight and persuade.Fighting is not the same as persuading. In fact, some...
Counting Each Shot: The FTD Version
Posted on December 02, 2008Here is an article of mine, recently published in the November 2008 issue of For the Defense. The title is Counting Each Shot: Techniques for Emphasis and De-emphasis. The lesson is how to use the structure of a written piece...
The elephant in the room
Posted on November 29, 2008Here is an excellent essay by Linda Morkan on confronting bad facts: No Room for Elephants. Linda compares bad facts or adverse law to ?the gray elephant in the corner buffing her nails,? which the lawyer pretends not to notice....
Issue statements in the real world
Posted on November 28, 2008How do practicing lawyers write issue statements in appellate briefs? Professor Judith Fischer set out to answer that question by analyzing samples of 50 sets of briefs from each of six states. The results are in her new article, Got...
Miscellaneous links
Posted on November 27, 2008Stop Sounding Like a Lawyer, in which Jim McElhaney offers lawyers tips to avoid their unnatural inclination to speak in legalese, and to instead tell a story in plain English. (Hat tip to Legal Writing Prof Blog.) The New Cicero,...
Rap duel translated into legal language
Posted on November 25, 2008Courtesy of Feddie, here is a rap duel translated into Legal English.
CLE opportunities
Posted on November 19, 2008If you?re a procrastinator still in need of some 2008 CLE hours, then consider signing up for Persuasive Legal Writing, a two-hour webcast seminar scheduled for December 10, 2008 from noon to 2 p.m. EST. The speaker is Prof. Timothy...
How to draft a judgment
Posted on November 13, 2008In Louisiana, the winner at a hearing or trial usually gets to draft the judgment. But most lawyers have little to no training in that task. Filling that void is Gail Stephenson?s new article in the Louisiana Bar Journal, Drafting...
Eight tricks you can do with Word
Posted on November 10, 2008PC Magazine carries this article, Eight Handy Tools in Microsoft Word You Probably Don?t Know About. If you find just one you can actually use, the article will be worth you while.
The purpose of legal writing
Posted on November 09, 2008Visit Law is Cool to see Calvin explain to Hobbes the purpose of legal writing.
Why Johnny can?t write
Posted on November 02, 2008Many have opined that the writing skills of law-school graduates are deteriorating. Why is that? Here are three theoretical answers: No one learns how to do old-school legal research anymore?the kind of research that begins in treatises, legal encyclopedias, and...
Quotation of the day
Posted on November 01, 2008Spotted on Mark Terry?s blog, This Writing Life:A burro is an ass. A burrow is a hole in the ground. As a journalist you are expected to know the difference.? United Press International Stylebook, cited by Bill Walsh in The...
For ?Bridging the Gap? participants
Posted on October 21, 2008This afternoon, I gave a one-hour presentation on Louisiana appellate practice at the Louisiana State Bar Association?s ?Bridging the Gap? seminar for newly sworn-in lawyers. For them and other interested persons, here are some things from that presentation, plus a...
Use plain English, appear smarter (and more persuasive)
Posted on October 20, 2008I just finished reading Yes! 50 Scientifically Proven Ways to Be Persuasive (hat tip to the [non]billable hour). One of the 50 ways confirms something Bryan Garner says in The Winning Brief (p. 177, 2d ed.): people who use plain...
The Chief channels Mickey Spillane
Posted on October 16, 2008Pennsylvania v. Dunlap. The Supremes deny cert. The Chief dissents:North Philly, May 4, 2001. Officer Sean Devlin, Narcotics Strike Force, was working the morning shift. Undercover surveillance. The neighborhood? Tough as a three-dollar steak. Devlin knew...
A checklist for drafting good contracts
Posted on October 11, 2008If your work involves drafting contracts, then you should read A Checklist for Drafting Good Contracts, by M.H. Sam Jacobson. Why a checklist? Jacobson explains:For all drafters, a checklist can ensure that the contract will contain the necessary substantive provisions...
Sex language
Posted on October 07, 2008Patricia O?Conner has written an interesting post on the Grammarphobia Blog debunking myths about the history of English words used to refer to the sexes. For instance: The use of masculine pronouns (he, him, his) to refer to both sexes...
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Did I harass someone?
Oh, yes. This can be taken in as so many things, especially since you had testif...
How to evict a roommate?
First, in most jurisdictions "self-help" is not a remedy available to any party ...
I have worked for this employer for only three weeks. The employer makes up his own rules as to what he chooses to report for the purpose of property taxes. He tells me to "let them come after us". He defines Entertain
He arrogantly insists, "let them come after us." Well, if you are invo...
This has happened 3 or 4 times a month now- they have turned the electric off 2 days consecutively, the water off about 9 or 10 times now, and our heat has broken 5 times (once it would not shut off, and we were forced t
i say stick with the apartment. eventually, everything possible will be replaced...
The company I worked for forced me to quit instead of dealing with someone harassing me, what can I do?
Look up CONSTRUCTIVE DISCHARGE...................this looks like what happened t...








